TEN PIRATES

IN MY WRITING I WAS TRYING TO ENTERTAIN AND HOOK THE READER INTO READING MY STORY. I have made my
story a mystery to keep the reader thinking. My story will 
leave you hanging for more.
Im am proud of this sentence because it gives you a FRIGHT:

SKELETONS OF PIRATES

They had flesh coming on there face and they

they didn't move apart from their mouths they keep

on repeating help us save us save us captain

then a mummy popped out from behind the the dead pirates and and and throw them into a hidden trap door three pirates then said “you had been warned” in a harsh voice “no” cried the captain

“Dooooooooooooont”

 
This story is going to blow your mind
from ANGUS the aurther (author)

Once there were ten pirates they where all nasty and mean

they ruled the seven seas but one day after a long journey they arrived at ancient Egypt to steal the pharaohs treasure but when they reached land a

old man stopped them don't go into the pyramid

Its got boobytraps “get out of the way old man”

Said one of the mean pirates so the pirates

ran over to the pyramid “you'll be sorry” called the old man. Later the pirates were even closer to the treasure until...one of the pirates had disappeared all they could hear was a scream as a shadow rolled over them then there was a long silence “you” yelled the captain pointing at a pirate “look if the path is clear” the pirate picked up a torch and took a few steps towards the corner suddenly

all the torches went out and there was a sudden darkness

then a cry of horror no one moved until the torches

torned on “look at this cried a pirate in a high shrill voice in horror all the pirates stared closely at the out line of

a PIRATE!  All that was left was a cutlass and a shiney

Gold doublon and BLOOD. Later WHEN TWO MORE men had meet their fate the six pirates went on and on and on

SUDDENLY the walls shock as a huge boulder rolled towards them THEN DISAPPEARED this is very strange

thought the captain. An hour later three men disappeared

The captain was getting really worried. That's when thing

WORSE the captain turned around and found SIX
SKELETONS OF PIRATES

They had flesh coming on there face and they

they didn't move apart from their mouths they keep

on repeating help us save us save us captain

then a mummy popped out from behind the the dead pirates and and and throw them into a hidden trap door three pirates then said “you had been warned” in a harsh voice “no” cried the captain

“Dooooooooooooont”