Camp omatua

Puketapu park was AWESOME

I love making faces

 I liked camp because there were lots of challenges on the way. Something that challenged me was wrapping up the adults into toilet paper I used my knowledge about mummies and put a present in between the bandages we wrapped the head first because real mummy's were wrapped head first .

Something I enjoyed was exploring the bamboo forest in side the bamboo forest there was a little hut made from bamboo . Some bamboo had fallen down to make a hut  inside the hut there were two stumps used as seats.The hut was very dark all you could see was a tiny gap in the roof .

                                                                                                                                                                    When it was almost bed time Mrs HILL walked in with a bucket "come and have a look at this Angus " she said. I peered into the bucket "WOW!!!" I said it was a huge spider it was the biggest spider I had ever seen Mrs HILL had  put a toilet paper roll down to let crawl throw it like a tunnel .

 "here comes the ball "

My highlight is the warterslide because you could beat peoples records and get a lollipop and because it was challenging                                      

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

Scary trapdoor

  I  have been learning to write  quality writing to hook the reader in to read my story by using detail. Some thing that has challenged me is my punctuation. I am proud of my ending because it gives you a fright!!!!!!